tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5922561838307837931.post4713993738449861588..comments2023-10-19T10:08:00.241-04:00Comments on Write First, Blog Later: Beach Scene BlogfestUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5922561838307837931.post-71408135611712034732010-06-08T23:30:12.280-04:002010-06-08T23:30:12.280-04:00This was really interesting, I'm already inves...This was really interesting, I'm already invested in the characters and want to have some answers! Well done this was a great post, thanks for sharing.Hayley Lovellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16786674202167099600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5922561838307837931.post-66469200764522929562010-06-06T15:43:37.391-04:002010-06-06T15:43:37.391-04:00Nice work. The set up is good. I like the part abo...Nice work. The set up is good. I like the part about just "being" as I know that feeling. Those moments are rare but good. The end makes it even more interesting due to the characters.Dawn Embershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00214560861614476799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5922561838307837931.post-19773168422131026432010-06-06T15:28:17.739-04:002010-06-06T15:28:17.739-04:00What's going on between Ginger and Ray? What a...What's going on between Ginger and Ray? What are these secrets? Tell meeeee!Sangu Mandannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09464061265952789628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5922561838307837931.post-10666303664760545502010-06-05T18:56:13.874-04:002010-06-05T18:56:13.874-04:00Nice setting and set up here. And I love that last...Nice setting and set up here. And I love that last line. :)sarahjayne smythehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02589820347348973092noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5922561838307837931.post-55049133202749358092010-06-05T18:26:46.925-04:002010-06-05T18:26:46.925-04:00I agree - this scene sets up a lot of great tensio...I agree - this scene sets up a lot of great tensions and mysteries. And I loved the line about just "being." That's my favorite part about beaches!L. Hildhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08784087836474776222noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5922561838307837931.post-84233077409198802042010-06-05T15:27:22.991-04:002010-06-05T15:27:22.991-04:00Hmm, interesting, interesting. I agree with Charit...Hmm, interesting, interesting. I agree with Charity's comment, but this is a great story idea. I want to know what Ginger's secret is.Abby Stevenshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06630840834227330806noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5922561838307837931.post-86055326867810576302010-06-05T13:06:44.756-04:002010-06-05T13:06:44.756-04:00I really enjoyed this. The only nitpick it the par...I really enjoyed this. The only nitpick it the paragraph where you show then tell the woman is not Ray's wife. I think you could build some tension and conflict by letting Ginger think they were married. Then you have something to work through and fix. Just a thought. <br /><br />I like the over all story line. Great job!Charity Bradfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01960821077619680661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5922561838307837931.post-29844871309837383802010-06-05T12:09:08.069-04:002010-06-05T12:09:08.069-04:00You ABANDONED this? Great scene!You ABANDONED this? Great scene!Misty Watershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17298645748620886228noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5922561838307837931.post-80951532044474071622010-06-05T10:39:26.471-04:002010-06-05T10:39:26.471-04:00Hi,
Good scene setting, nice touch at the end!
b...Hi,<br /><br />Good scene setting, nice touch at the end!<br /><br />best<br />F<br /><br />I don't think mine really rates beach scene!Francine Howarthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02326542867876257042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5922561838307837931.post-34033921743120363742010-06-05T08:56:48.624-04:002010-06-05T08:56:48.624-04:00Nice! I want to read more!!! What's up between...Nice! I want to read more!!! What's up between Ginger and Ray? What happened to the boy's mom?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11046724975658216337noreply@blogger.com