Saturday, May 1, 2010

Last Line Blogfest

Thanks to Lilah Pierce for this blogfest!  Interesting concept. 

I decided to contribute one of my chapter endings from my WIP.


He felt splintered, scattered; he was flying up in the air in a thousand different pieces; he was falling to earth like the embers of a spent firework; he was gone into a womb of quiet darkness.

He was gone.

15 comments:

  1. I enjoyed this. It definately made me want to read more. Great work!

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  2. I love your imagery - nice work!

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  3. Wow. Great imagery. And I love your last line.

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  4. great last line. i played along on my blog, too.

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  5. Oooo. It's like you painted a picture.

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  6. Scattered, ebbed and faded to grey - well done Christine

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  7. Thank you, all, for your kind words!

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  8. Awesome! That was really great and thanks so much for participating!

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  9. That was so quick and brilliant...I loved it.

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  10. Wow, almost a story in itself.

    Nicely done.

    .........dhole

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  11. I'm still getting around to all the Blogfest writers, great last line, "He was gone." Well done!

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  12. Such very interesting imagery. I definitely want to know why this has happened or why he feels this way. :)

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