Thanks to Lilah Pierce for this blogfest! Interesting concept.
I decided to contribute one of my chapter endings from my WIP.
He felt splintered, scattered; he was flying up in the air in a thousand different pieces; he was falling to earth like the embers of a spent firework; he was gone into a womb of quiet darkness.
He was gone.
I enjoyed this. It definately made me want to read more. Great work!
ReplyDeleteI love your imagery - nice work!
ReplyDeleteWow. Great imagery. And I love your last line.
ReplyDeletegreat last line. i played along on my blog, too.
ReplyDeleteOooo. It's like you painted a picture.
ReplyDeleteScattered, ebbed and faded to grey - well done Christine
ReplyDeleteJust one word: Wow.
ReplyDeleteVery literary!
ReplyDeleteThank you, all, for your kind words!
ReplyDeleteAwesome! That was really great and thanks so much for participating!
ReplyDeleteThat was so quick and brilliant...I loved it.
ReplyDeleteWow, almost a story in itself.
ReplyDeleteNicely done.
.........dhole
I'm still getting around to all the Blogfest writers, great last line, "He was gone." Well done!
ReplyDeleteSuch very interesting imagery. I definitely want to know why this has happened or why he feels this way. :)
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