But it's hard to get people to limit their sharing to something really short. I feel that we are in a very quick-paced social media universe; people don't have time to read pages and pages and comment on it. (Well, at least I don't.) But I love sharing stuff I'm working on, 'cuz writing is a lonely profession. ("One is such a lonely number...")
So, here are my six sentences. I know there are a lot of "ands" but I don't know how to describe this kind of action without them.
With a great effort she whispered, “Raynor, please don’t.”
“You may not speak to me!” He lunged at her as if to tear her apart with his hands. She screamed and Nighfala leapt up, caught his arm in her teeth and pulled him down. He hit his head on the floor and grunted. The spell died. Nighfala let him go and began licking his face.