|"It was so much easier in the first draft."|
I don't see how I can possibly do it without help. My husband is helping today by taking our son out for the day so I can be alone, but the house needs cleaning, we need laundry done, we have no groceries, and I MUST go to the post office before it closes. I have decided to write for 50 minutes, then do chores for 10 minutes, until they come home.
I need another form of help, too. I need a few objective readers to look at the first several chapters and tell me if
a) it's crap and
b) I should re-restructure the opening.
So if anyone who reads or writes fantasy is willing to do a quick read and get back to me by mid-next-week, please let me know in the comments. Thanks.
In the meantime, forget the "Tea, Earl Grey, hot." I need a double cappuchino pronto! Good thing my favorite coffee shop is right next to the post office.